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I long for the sobering moan of a lone instrument drifting through the   empty mountain air, the kind that pulls you from your soul to some     other ethereal place where nothing exists but the breeze and those soft       to booming notes rippling and shining through like twinkling stars         each leaving its own message in a bottle that I only wish I had eyes           strong enough to read.
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Sep 4, 2016
Sep 4, 2016 at 4:09 PM UTC
Notes on the Breeze
I long for the sobering moan of a lone instrument drifting through the   empty mountain air, the kind that pulls you from your soul to some     other ethereal place where nothing exists but the breeze and those soft       to booming notes rippling and shining through like twinkling stars         each leaving its own message in a bottle that I only wish I had eyes           strong enough to read.
inspired by track 18, Deserted Village : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2R_XDufYKvY
david-t-carratola
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Sep 4, 2016
Sep 4, 2016 at 4:09 PM UTC
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