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I'm trying to find a path. The one that leads to sleep and straight into my dreams. I'm thinking that if find it, quantify it, and twist it enough, they might become reality. I might be able to run past the nightmares and the conflicts and the insanity. My path is indestructible and it attracts my feet. I don't have to think It's like the ground is moving beneath me, like a black strip of ground is moving beneath me on repeat. Everyone is suddenly walking on a path Everyone is on different pieces of ground, on their own black path moving beneath them so they don't have to think. If these paths don't touch, they don't make eye contact. They are all together physically, but they're in their own worlds... ...Who am I kidding, we're all in our own worlds! And here I am trying to decide which way to go when I realize it's already been decided. I'm moving forward on this stupid black path that never changes. I find myself looking around at the blank walls, the blank faces, the plugged in faces! The darting eyes avoiding contact. There's something wrong here. It hits me every time, full blown. There's a reason why I avoid the gym. I'd rather run outside and let the world take me in. I'd rather be able to jump if I wanna, or sing, or say something to the people around me. Or escape the people around me! Find a place where I can truly be. On my own. So many people are afraid of being alone. I want this generation to see, to explore, to fall and get up and all the things like making forts and traps and seeing off the top of a mountain - from outside your car ... Guys, there are stars in some places. I'm telling you, there are things worth seeing out there. I'm telling you what needs to happen. You need to get up off your seat, unplug your eyes from the screen, and go discover for yourself where you end up one day. **** this path of perfection, **** all the shortcuts and technology and craziness, this culture of disconnection is literally driving people insane! Start asking yourself questions and you'll realize Wikipedia can't tell you everything. Peel away from your text and you might notice a blossoming tree. The world changes. Daily. It will change, daily, for the rest of your life. And I don't know about you, but I'd rather not let it pass me by.
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Feb 18, 2012
Feb 18, 2012 at 11:21 PM UTC
Challenging the treadmill culture
I'm trying to find a path. The one that leads to sleep and straight into my dreams. I'm thinking that if find it, quantify it, and twist it enough, they might become reality. I might be able to run past the nightmares and the conflicts and the insanity. My path is indestructible and it attracts my feet. I don't have to think It's like the ground is moving beneath me, like a black strip of ground is moving beneath me on repeat. Everyone is suddenly walking on a path Everyone is on different pieces of ground, on their own black path moving beneath them so they don't have to think. If these paths don't touch, they don't make eye contact. They are all together physically, but they're in their own worlds... ...Who am I kidding, we're all in our own worlds! And here I am trying to decide which way to go when I realize it's already been decided. I'm moving forward on this stupid black path that never changes. I find myself looking around at the blank walls, the blank faces, the plugged in faces! The darting eyes avoiding contact. There's something wrong here. It hits me every time, full blown. There's a reason why I avoid the gym. I'd rather run outside and let the world take me in. I'd rather be able to jump if I wanna, or sing, or say something to the people around me. Or escape the people around me! Find a place where I can truly be. On my own. So many people are afraid of being alone. I want this generation to see, to explore, to fall and get up and all the things like making forts and traps and seeing off the top of a mountain - from outside your car ... Guys, there are stars in some places. I'm telling you, there are things worth seeing out there. I'm telling you what needs to happen. You need to get up off your seat, unplug your eyes from the screen, and go discover for yourself where you end up one day. **** this path of perfection, **** all the shortcuts and technology and craziness, this culture of disconnection is literally driving people insane! Start asking yourself questions and you'll realize Wikipedia can't tell you everything. Peel away from your text and you might notice a blossoming tree. The world changes. Daily. It will change, daily, for the rest of your life. And I don't know about you, but I'd rather not let it pass me by.
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Feb 18, 2012
Feb 18, 2012 at 11:21 PM UTC
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