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I’ve reached a roadblock in this punch-drunk-- The exhilarated semblance of warm-color happiness is peeled back like the layers of an onion to reveal raw, pungent inexperience sincere in frankness, yet clumsy in approach The blurred lines of tender affection and pious adulation-- The muddy waters of passionate attachment and fiery dominion-- A foolish game for a foolish girl.
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Aug 31, 2016
Aug 31, 2016 at 12:45 PM UTC
Green Girl part 2
I’ve reached a roadblock in this punch-drunk-- The exhilarated semblance of warm-color happiness is peeled back like the layers of an onion to reveal raw, pungent inexperience sincere in frankness, yet clumsy in approach The blurred lines of tender affection and pious adulation-- The muddy waters of passionate attachment and fiery dominion-- A foolish game for a foolish girl.
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Aug 31, 2016
Aug 31, 2016 at 12:45 PM UTC
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