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I’m locked up Rapunzel 5th floor view Witches Brew keeping me sub-due         Mind wanders delirious         Phantom sounds intrude a mind’s         Creek of thoughts creeping         Into inebriated contemplations                       Would she ride fast or slow A day dream delirious images of a past Love interrupts                        *She hushes me, the 4-walled prison is white and painted in rains of vitamin, leaked in                               through portals propped open with a warm breeze taking the virginity of white curtains,                        we embrace.* I erupt. Fantasies flood the ever expanding corners of my mind Drowning my emotional state with movie clips Reminiscent of love that should be forbidden                 *She smiles from ear to ear.                  my heart stops,                  then travels north, constricting my only freeway of life.* I give no fight With a limited supply, I only want to waste it on you.
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Feb 16, 2012
Feb 16, 2012 at 11:53 AM UTC
Daydreamin’
I’m locked up Rapunzel 5th floor view Witches Brew keeping me sub-due         Mind wanders delirious         Phantom sounds intrude a mind’s         Creek of thoughts creeping         Into inebriated contemplations                       Would she ride fast or slow A day dream delirious images of a past Love interrupts                        *She hushes me, the 4-walled prison is white and painted in rains of vitamin, leaked in                               through portals propped open with a warm breeze taking the virginity of white curtains,                        we embrace.* I erupt. Fantasies flood the ever expanding corners of my mind Drowning my emotional state with movie clips Reminiscent of love that should be forbidden                 *She smiles from ear to ear.                  my heart stops,                  then travels north, constricting my only freeway of life.* I give no fight With a limited supply, I only want to waste it on you.
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Feb 16, 2012
Feb 16, 2012 at 11:53 AM UTC
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