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My desperation is not discreet. It sprays off my tongue every time we meet. Like the octopus squirts ink to evade capture. Inky I love you's flood from my mouth, a Tsunami of rapture. Loving you is the ocean and desperation is decompression sickness. Whenever I come up to breathe my head spins, nitrogen bubbles explode in place of butterflies. Isolated on this lonely island, my clouded mind tears me asunder. If I die a living death you would be my beautiful, poetic blunder.
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Aug 27, 2016
Aug 27, 2016 at 3:58 AM UTC
Desperate poetic blunders!
My desperation is not discreet. It sprays off my tongue every time we meet. Like the octopus squirts ink to evade capture. Inky I love you's flood from my mouth, a Tsunami of rapture. Loving you is the ocean and desperation is decompression sickness. Whenever I come up to breathe my head spins, nitrogen bubbles explode in place of butterflies. Isolated on this lonely island, my clouded mind tears me asunder. If I die a living death you would be my beautiful, poetic blunder.
Rapture: an intense feeling of joy or pleasure.
amanda-francis
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Aug 27, 2016
Aug 27, 2016 at 3:58 AM UTC
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