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when her toe hit the wood                 the nail split in half                                                                                     in the center                                         cracked just right                                                      so when she applied pressure                                  on her leg to be straight                                                  up and down stretchy muscle        the split        splintered                    and while falling she pumped                                             air through her fists, open and closing                                                                    maybe for the tan bar which                                                                                     she could command in practice                                     which she demanded now                                    yet the stage was only the light and                                                                                                            pieces of wood                                                                                                                        and nail                                                             upon landing the crowd gasped                                                                        in entertainment                                                                 at how graceful feathers                                                                    flew from her mouth                                                                      black and flawless                                                                                     like the lace of her costume                                                                                                                   envisioning a swan                                                                                                                    a crow                                                                   it didn't matter at all                    both could fly                     but they had wings                                               and she had faults, deep deep tremors                                                  opened wide on the great black valley                         coughing up feathers                         when she wanted tears and the crowd just stared some smiling some surprised                        all without blinking                                      when the legs decided to extend some support                        the mistake took root and gave her a rush of shame                                which allowed her to fly                                           [briefly]                  behind the curtains                                                                               like the crow                                                                                like the swan                                       after the silence                                      of awed mouths                                                           gushes of applause                                                                                    for the splintered tiny dancer                                who tried to show the world she                                                                  had something to say                                                          but instead only managed to                                                              sprinkle the audience with                                                                         a few feathers. They all gave it rave reviews
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Feb 15, 2012
Feb 15, 2012 at 1:37 PM UTC
feathers
when her toe hit the wood                 the nail split in half                                                                                     in the center                                         cracked just right                                                      so when she applied pressure                                  on her leg to be straight                                                  up and down stretchy muscle        the split        splintered                    and while falling she pumped                                             air through her fists, open and closing                                                                    maybe for the tan bar which                                                                                     she could command in practice                                     which she demanded now                                    yet the stage was only the light and                                                                                                            pieces of wood                                                                                                                        and nail                                                             upon landing the crowd gasped                                                                        in entertainment                                                                 at how graceful feathers                                                                    flew from her mouth                                                                      black and flawless                                                                                     like the lace of her costume                                                                                                                   envisioning a swan                                                                                                                    a crow                                                                   it didn't matter at all                    both could fly                     but they had wings                                               and she had faults, deep deep tremors                                                  opened wide on the great black valley                         coughing up feathers                         when she wanted tears and the crowd just stared some smiling some surprised                        all without blinking                                      when the legs decided to extend some support                        the mistake took root and gave her a rush of shame                                which allowed her to fly                                           [briefly]                  behind the curtains                                                                               like the crow                                                                                like the swan                                       after the silence                                      of awed mouths                                                           gushes of applause                                                                                    for the splintered tiny dancer                                who tried to show the world she                                                                  had something to say                                                          but instead only managed to                                                              sprinkle the audience with                                                                         a few feathers. They all gave it rave reviews
megan-hundley
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Feb 15, 2012
Feb 15, 2012 at 1:37 PM UTC
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