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15/2 /12 02:07 She's slipping through the loopholes in my prayers Defying all attempts to wish her well The world at large so little knows or cares How many languish in a private hell She's slipping through the system; what there is And loopholes of what care there ought to be She's teetering before a precipice The endless chasm of the wait-and-see A prayer is but an exertion of will Sent drifting in the bright dome of the sky Each one of many; some unanswered still Some high priority, some drift on by. She's slipping through the loopholes in our prayers, Fading the hopes of everyone who cares.
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Feb 15, 2012
Feb 15, 2012 at 3:29 AM UTC
Slippage (for my Sister)
15/2 /12 02:07 She's slipping through the loopholes in my prayers Defying all attempts to wish her well The world at large so little knows or cares How many languish in a private hell She's slipping through the system; what there is And loopholes of what care there ought to be She's teetering before a precipice The endless chasm of the wait-and-see A prayer is but an exertion of will Sent drifting in the bright dome of the sky Each one of many; some unanswered still Some high priority, some drift on by. She's slipping through the loopholes in our prayers, Fading the hopes of everyone who cares.
sara-l-russell
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Feb 15, 2012
Feb 15, 2012 at 3:29 AM UTC
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