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Who cares if I can't tell whether it's you or the view that makes me want to say out loud just how beautiful this is to me? Whether not by either of our choices both our lives through every trip, turn, and half hearted heartache burned have both amounted to you, this view, and I, losing grip of words try to pry a peek at something which I never thought I'd see a glimpse of. Please, let me burn this last candle if it means I get to see one more single flicker of your quicker smile.
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Aug 22, 2016
Aug 22, 2016 at 9:55 AM UTC
Moonlit
Who cares if I can't tell whether it's you or the view that makes me want to say out loud just how beautiful this is to me? Whether not by either of our choices both our lives through every trip, turn, and half hearted heartache burned have both amounted to you, this view, and I, losing grip of words try to pry a peek at something which I never thought I'd see a glimpse of. Please, let me burn this last candle if it means I get to see one more single flicker of your quicker smile.
cameron-boyd
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Aug 22, 2016
Aug 22, 2016 at 9:55 AM UTC
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