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You tenderly carve, day and night my heart with your chisel, sharp, incisive as if it's a block of alabaster, at your disposal chosen to create your one true masterpiece. I believe in you,and submit, why? I can't really tell Isn't it true love, that transcends limits of thought? I let you do it as I can see  it pleases you the most, after the moment your eyes had fallen on mine first and stood still; I saw a divine  excitement on your face. Is it pleasure or pain?I can't answer that question I love you, and want you to do what pleases you the most. My muse said, "Don't let her do this, she doesn't know it's true worth, she'll ruin it in her, enthusiasm without limits" I said in a whisper "I've hopelessly fallen in love, for ever" I'd be your monument of whatever, success or failure, I feel  the forces of nature that decide what it turns out, at last and I listen to the sound of hammer on the chisel and patiently wait.
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Aug 7, 2016
Aug 7, 2016 at 11:36 AM UTC
The monument
You tenderly carve, day and night my heart with your chisel, sharp, incisive as if it's a block of alabaster, at your disposal chosen to create your one true masterpiece. I believe in you,and submit, why? I can't really tell Isn't it true love, that transcends limits of thought? I let you do it as I can see  it pleases you the most, after the moment your eyes had fallen on mine first and stood still; I saw a divine  excitement on your face. Is it pleasure or pain?I can't answer that question I love you, and want you to do what pleases you the most. My muse said, "Don't let her do this, she doesn't know it's true worth, she'll ruin it in her, enthusiasm without limits" I said in a whisper "I've hopelessly fallen in love, for ever" I'd be your monument of whatever, success or failure, I feel  the forces of nature that decide what it turns out, at last and I listen to the sound of hammer on the chisel and patiently wait.
Where does this love lead me...I'd trust this love and follow...
k-balachandran
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Aug 7, 2016
Aug 7, 2016 at 11:36 AM UTC
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