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I never knew tonight Was the last cigarette in the pack I never learned which way your hands went and why Or if your car would have made it to D.C without dying But I remember How cold your hands were And how it was raining And how you looked like an actress caught in a simulated rainstorm and the fan would blow your hair and the water buckets poured And Johnny offscreen Banging aluminum sheets together for thunder a cigarette hangs from his lips a flashbulb for some lightning Your umbrella opens up beneath your make up running My chest began to squeeze Between your wet hair falling I couldn't hold it back any longer I love you ......and cut
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Feb 9, 2012
Feb 9, 2012 at 1:04 AM UTC
"Oh yeah, we can edit that out at the end."
I never knew tonight Was the last cigarette in the pack I never learned which way your hands went and why Or if your car would have made it to D.C without dying But I remember How cold your hands were And how it was raining And how you looked like an actress caught in a simulated rainstorm and the fan would blow your hair and the water buckets poured And Johnny offscreen Banging aluminum sheets together for thunder a cigarette hangs from his lips a flashbulb for some lightning Your umbrella opens up beneath your make up running My chest began to squeeze Between your wet hair falling I couldn't hold it back any longer I love you ......and cut
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Feb 9, 2012
Feb 9, 2012 at 1:04 AM UTC
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