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It’s such a shame you are a Christian, despite what you have done, You have taken bigger steps than most men ever will do, And live a life that can inspire jealousy in the zaniest adventurers, by living on your own as a nomad for half a year, creating art, meeting strangers, following your heart and gut, And you put all the blame, all your self achievement on a god, and I don’t understand. No doubt I am an ignorant, selfish man destined to the pit of hell or some other place for my ludicrous skepticism to most theist, but it saddens me. You lived a life and had a great spiritual journey—for even I believe in some sort of spirit (just not the one you do) using your own self reliance, your own will and passion and ambition, No doubt the perfect example of the American dream, Going out alone in the desert and coming back with gold, And yet, You say you are a mere follower, like a lowly dog, Chasing at a deities heels, Praising him for all that he has done even though I am sure without him it would have happened anyway. It just makes me sad, that’s all. I could never find a reason to justify altruism, Or why I would ever want to deny the power of the self, Who do you respect more, the man who was born from ****** who had to fight his way up to the top or else get beaten down, trampled on, forgotten, one who knows your pain and knows that only you can get through it, ****** and dying you may be, or the man who was born under the watchful gaze of a strict parent, smiling willfully as the parent dropped bread crumbs along their path, and god forbid the man ever deviate from it? I don’t understand it one bit, We speak a completely different language.
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Feb 8, 2012
Feb 8, 2012 at 1:07 AM UTC
A Different Language
It’s such a shame you are a Christian, despite what you have done, You have taken bigger steps than most men ever will do, And live a life that can inspire jealousy in the zaniest adventurers, by living on your own as a nomad for half a year, creating art, meeting strangers, following your heart and gut, And you put all the blame, all your self achievement on a god, and I don’t understand. No doubt I am an ignorant, selfish man destined to the pit of hell or some other place for my ludicrous skepticism to most theist, but it saddens me. You lived a life and had a great spiritual journey—for even I believe in some sort of spirit (just not the one you do) using your own self reliance, your own will and passion and ambition, No doubt the perfect example of the American dream, Going out alone in the desert and coming back with gold, And yet, You say you are a mere follower, like a lowly dog, Chasing at a deities heels, Praising him for all that he has done even though I am sure without him it would have happened anyway. It just makes me sad, that’s all. I could never find a reason to justify altruism, Or why I would ever want to deny the power of the self, Who do you respect more, the man who was born from ****** who had to fight his way up to the top or else get beaten down, trampled on, forgotten, one who knows your pain and knows that only you can get through it, ****** and dying you may be, or the man who was born under the watchful gaze of a strict parent, smiling willfully as the parent dropped bread crumbs along their path, and god forbid the man ever deviate from it? I don’t understand it one bit, We speak a completely different language.
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Feb 8, 2012
Feb 8, 2012 at 1:07 AM UTC
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