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Dark room full of loud whispers " man i wish i would have kissed her" ryhming outta place because the fool forgot her " maybe i should diss her?" Thoughts of past thoughts and pounding hearts " i had a couples chances" Now the love is cold and dark " I probably looked like an Amateur" This is the last time i behave gently " why cant women see the good in me?" I always seem to mess it up " should have showed her my poetry" Tired of being the most confident shy guy "maybe take her out to dinner" I watched too many romantic movies "i'll send her some flowers" Jerks win the love by showing none "They'll be in and out within an hour" Giving up these endeavors "Of course my tone is sour"
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Feb 5, 2012
Feb 5, 2012 at 3:11 AM UTC
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Dark room full of loud whispers " man i wish i would have kissed her" ryhming outta place because the fool forgot her " maybe i should diss her?" Thoughts of past thoughts and pounding hearts " i had a couples chances" Now the love is cold and dark " I probably looked like an Amateur" This is the last time i behave gently " why cant women see the good in me?" I always seem to mess it up " should have showed her my poetry" Tired of being the most confident shy guy "maybe take her out to dinner" I watched too many romantic movies "i'll send her some flowers" Jerks win the love by showing none "They'll be in and out within an hour" Giving up these endeavors "Of course my tone is sour"
montay-henson
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Feb 5, 2012
Feb 5, 2012 at 3:11 AM UTC
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