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CAPTAIN JIM I know a mate called Captain Jim Who wants one written for him… The man’s in command That I understand, And I must determine his whim. What do I say of my Commander (He requests he get the first gander)… I’d better be sure Of facts I procure, I will not use hearsay or slander. If he wants a fine fantasy He can do it much better than me… I hear there are lines That work sometimes To put something under the tree. I’m reluctant to say any more, Don’t need an escort out the door… From Commander Jim Who must have his whim Of watching my sweat out-pour! ---J. Caswell
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Feb 5, 2012
Feb 5, 2012 at 2:33 AM UTC
CAPTAIN JIM
CAPTAIN JIM I know a mate called Captain Jim Who wants one written for him… The man’s in command That I understand, And I must determine his whim. What do I say of my Commander (He requests he get the first gander)… I’d better be sure Of facts I procure, I will not use hearsay or slander. If he wants a fine fantasy He can do it much better than me… I hear there are lines That work sometimes To put something under the tree. I’m reluctant to say any more, Don’t need an escort out the door… From Commander Jim Who must have his whim Of watching my sweat out-pour! ---J. Caswell
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Feb 5, 2012
Feb 5, 2012 at 2:33 AM UTC
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