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Success & Epic Failures A quote I got from Mr Rampton on His twirling Tweet account. I thought, impressed, amazed, “A catchy phrase, I think I’ll write it down and later write it up, It being just my cup of tea: ‘Success and Epic Failures’, You and me: Sporadically, frequently, Scarcely ever, almost never – Take your pick. Who hasn’t had them both? Betrothed to neither, One should rise above the two - ******** ‘round with mind and ego as they do, Never lasting, alternating Life throughout. I think I’ll write a song -to-be: Avail myself of phrase as symbol: ‘Failure and Success’ et al, With appeal universal, With potential to sell millions, With success and epic failures, Which of us has never been derailed And won Ten-umpteen times In life? Success & Epic Failures 7.17.2016 Pure Nakedness; Circling Round Reality; Out Times, Our Culture II; Arlene Corwin Success & Epic Failures 7.17.2016 Pure Nakedness; Circling Round Reality; Out Times, Our Culture II; Arlene Corwin
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Jul 17, 2016
Jul 17, 2016 at 7:08 AM UTC
Success & Epic Failures
Success & Epic Failures A quote I got from Mr Rampton on His twirling Tweet account. I thought, impressed, amazed, “A catchy phrase, I think I’ll write it down and later write it up, It being just my cup of tea: ‘Success and Epic Failures’, You and me: Sporadically, frequently, Scarcely ever, almost never – Take your pick. Who hasn’t had them both? Betrothed to neither, One should rise above the two - ******** ‘round with mind and ego as they do, Never lasting, alternating Life throughout. I think I’ll write a song -to-be: Avail myself of phrase as symbol: ‘Failure and Success’ et al, With appeal universal, With potential to sell millions, With success and epic failures, Which of us has never been derailed And won Ten-umpteen times In life? Success & Epic Failures 7.17.2016 Pure Nakedness; Circling Round Reality; Out Times, Our Culture II; Arlene Corwin Success & Epic Failures 7.17.2016 Pure Nakedness; Circling Round Reality; Out Times, Our Culture II; Arlene Corwin
I've edited it, trying to refine and simplify at the same time.  I do that. Often I write with enthusiasm and think everything is at I intended,  Then I re-read and discover a weak rhyme or the meter off, a better adjective or no adjective.  This poem took approximately two hours to write, but looking at it again 10 hours or three edits later,  it's simply not up to par. My humble apologies. Arlene
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Jul 17, 2016
Jul 17, 2016 at 7:08 AM UTC
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