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From long time friends to bitter foes; From boon companions to friends estranged. The cute little redhead accomplished that. but it was nothing she'd prearranged . So delicate, so beautiful, with eyes a deep Aegean blue. Of course I made a play for her. She wasn't going home with you. Yes, her kisses were as sweet as you imagined they must be. The reality was better still warming an autumn evenings chill. I was the first to take the risk, that’s why I was the one she kissed. My actions weren’t the least bit shady, but faint hearts never win fair Ladies.
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Feb 4, 2012
Feb 4, 2012 at 9:49 PM UTC
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From long time friends to bitter foes; From boon companions to friends estranged. The cute little redhead accomplished that. but it was nothing she'd prearranged . So delicate, so beautiful, with eyes a deep Aegean blue. Of course I made a play for her. She wasn't going home with you. Yes, her kisses were as sweet as you imagined they must be. The reality was better still warming an autumn evenings chill. I was the first to take the risk, that’s why I was the one she kissed. My actions weren’t the least bit shady, but faint hearts never win fair Ladies.
My friend and I were both interested in the same girl on the same night. In the tradition of Mosby's raiders,I got there first with the most. Lives can be changed on a single night.
john-f-mccullagh
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Feb 4, 2012
Feb 4, 2012 at 9:49 PM UTC
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