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The story began one night in the dark when most curious minds were asleep. Sitting silently, only fingers tapping the keys, “You tempted me like an empty page,” he wrote, longing for a response of immediacy that would fill his mind with more words, the only thing he took comfort in. She stepped aside from the voices at her gathering to read his message. “Emptiness,” she wrote back, “lives in the mind, the habit of looking for what’s lost. There is no zero in nature. Let me tempt you with fullness instead. Come and see what I see, and share what is there.” As she sent the message, she swallowed deeply knowing that what she offered was not quite a lie but more of an unfulfilled desire. “I can give you what I never had,” she thought. Her mind wandered, filling with all the ways that only emptiness can. He wasn’t sure what she was offering him. Whatever it was, he longed for it. Her words flooded him with a feeling he couldn’t name. Love? Desire?  Intoxication? Yes. As the sun rose, he took no notice of fatigue, thirst, hunger. He forgot the empty days, the time spent looking in the mirror, counting the lost years. He began again to write.
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Jul 9, 2016
Jul 9, 2016 at 12:13 PM UTC
Musing
The story began one night in the dark when most curious minds were asleep. Sitting silently, only fingers tapping the keys, “You tempted me like an empty page,” he wrote, longing for a response of immediacy that would fill his mind with more words, the only thing he took comfort in. She stepped aside from the voices at her gathering to read his message. “Emptiness,” she wrote back, “lives in the mind, the habit of looking for what’s lost. There is no zero in nature. Let me tempt you with fullness instead. Come and see what I see, and share what is there.” As she sent the message, she swallowed deeply knowing that what she offered was not quite a lie but more of an unfulfilled desire. “I can give you what I never had,” she thought. Her mind wandered, filling with all the ways that only emptiness can. He wasn’t sure what she was offering him. Whatever it was, he longed for it. Her words flooded him with a feeling he couldn’t name. Love? Desire?  Intoxication? Yes. As the sun rose, he took no notice of fatigue, thirst, hunger. He forgot the empty days, the time spent looking in the mirror, counting the lost years. He began again to write.
A collaboration with my friend Candace Smith.
david-adamson
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Jul 9, 2016
Jul 9, 2016 at 12:13 PM UTC
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