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My shiny car, I love that Japanese luxury It was a hand-me-down from my mom I love her for that I named my car Avy short for Avalon A good Asian car not like those American cars Those American cars are big and strong Asian Cars are easy-going and have nicer sound systems But there’s something different about this car Every year The metal Rusts away And I’m scared that one day I’ll lose her
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Jul 7, 2016
Jul 7, 2016 at 4:15 PM UTC
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My shiny car, I love that Japanese luxury It was a hand-me-down from my mom I love her for that I named my car Avy short for Avalon A good Asian car not like those American cars Those American cars are big and strong Asian Cars are easy-going and have nicer sound systems But there’s something different about this car Every year The metal Rusts away And I’m scared that one day I’ll lose her
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Jul 7, 2016
Jul 7, 2016 at 4:15 PM UTC
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