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Unfinished Emptiness a question enrobed in nothingness stillness cries across the void in its intolerable State you stand the will wilts the eyes portray defeat and sorrow a searching longing is plainly evident This powerful demanding current must be appeased chaos screams the idle continues his dreams Faltering movements are all that is known a stationary seizure pervades the deadliest image an old Amusement park dead and deserted a mocking sign proclaims thrills inside the torment rushes like A stampeded herd it threatens sure death your own plaintive dead voice is heard in this arena of Dispirited dashed hopes a mauling traumatized and once energetic hope filled spirit that trouble Assailed Then fell back and then with the genius touch as you reeled it simply fell away your steps to Recover Also ceased with the careless and deadliest words of all what is the point this has become your Standard if titled in great black letters it would read lackluster lying in the dirt whipped defeated Disgusted exiled in oblivions nowhere hope has had the first letter changed to D yes Dope in capital Letters little do you Realize this is the very act of reconstruction the best military force in the world Engages in this kind of training someone who has potential is the tried and true diamond in the rough a Superior force is needed take the outward restraints off by reducing the individual to his base when you Have destroyed the unfavorable elements then begin the renewing process that is clean and absent of Impurities build with tried and true methods that produce heroes from fired kilns the blaze flared and a New form emerges pure as refined brass but the man or woman is steeled into purity and honor and is Made ready to pass into combats immortal glory whether it be military, business, or sacred duty of the Church know this before just a nameless conflicted person little thought of will do exploits he will put New building Blocks in societies ever increasing wall and maybe ultimately he will fulfill the words of Jefferson and by blood sacrifice his patriotism will cause the tree of liberty to flourish because the call to Fight for peace is never finished
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Jan 29, 2012
Jan 29, 2012 at 6:19 PM UTC
Unfinished
Unfinished Emptiness a question enrobed in nothingness stillness cries across the void in its intolerable State you stand the will wilts the eyes portray defeat and sorrow a searching longing is plainly evident This powerful demanding current must be appeased chaos screams the idle continues his dreams Faltering movements are all that is known a stationary seizure pervades the deadliest image an old Amusement park dead and deserted a mocking sign proclaims thrills inside the torment rushes like A stampeded herd it threatens sure death your own plaintive dead voice is heard in this arena of Dispirited dashed hopes a mauling traumatized and once energetic hope filled spirit that trouble Assailed Then fell back and then with the genius touch as you reeled it simply fell away your steps to Recover Also ceased with the careless and deadliest words of all what is the point this has become your Standard if titled in great black letters it would read lackluster lying in the dirt whipped defeated Disgusted exiled in oblivions nowhere hope has had the first letter changed to D yes Dope in capital Letters little do you Realize this is the very act of reconstruction the best military force in the world Engages in this kind of training someone who has potential is the tried and true diamond in the rough a Superior force is needed take the outward restraints off by reducing the individual to his base when you Have destroyed the unfavorable elements then begin the renewing process that is clean and absent of Impurities build with tried and true methods that produce heroes from fired kilns the blaze flared and a New form emerges pure as refined brass but the man or woman is steeled into purity and honor and is Made ready to pass into combats immortal glory whether it be military, business, or sacred duty of the Church know this before just a nameless conflicted person little thought of will do exploits he will put New building Blocks in societies ever increasing wall and maybe ultimately he will fulfill the words of Jefferson and by blood sacrifice his patriotism will cause the tree of liberty to flourish because the call to Fight for peace is never finished
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Jan 29, 2012
Jan 29, 2012 at 6:19 PM UTC
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