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Freedom is a gift and curse, When time is finite and eludes, It leaves us many wounds to nurse With every choice that life exudes, Affirming one, we must deny, The others we may have pursued While pondering the reasons why, We're here at all, and what it means, With knowledge that we'll one day die This life is wondrous, yet obscene,          Both terrifying, and serene.
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Jun 24, 2016
Jun 24, 2016 at 11:01 AM UTC
If Dante Were An Existentialist For Five Seconds
Freedom is a gift and curse, When time is finite and eludes, It leaves us many wounds to nurse With every choice that life exudes, Affirming one, we must deny, The others we may have pursued While pondering the reasons why, We're here at all, and what it means, With knowledge that we'll one day die This life is wondrous, yet obscene,          Both terrifying, and serene.
The terza rima scheme was pioneered by Dante in his Divine Comedy. As you can see, the scheme works in tercets where the second line provides the rhyme for the first and third lines of the following stanza. I'm just getting my feet wet with this style, and this poem is more of an exercise. It's a tricky rhyme scheme, but I think if I spend enough time with it, I'll get it down.
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Jun 24, 2016
Jun 24, 2016 at 11:01 AM UTC
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