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(20 minute poetry) 11am tube is jacked packed to the rafters no sound of laughter only the dismal wails as we go down the rails on the trail we have travelled before. I'm stood in the aisle surrounded by a perch full of people a pike load of tenseness that waits to explode. jeez this road keeps on getting tougher Why should I suffer it? why not opt out of it? But I am bound to it a dog in the pound to it gnawing away as it too gnaws at me one day I'll be free of it if only to sit and spit or whittle some wood into pegs. Legs are giving me gyp tripped over the case on the floor did I give that person what for ha she took not a blind bit of notice and just flew into the seat I was eying she being firty years younger than I I want to cry. Is a vote no a no vote or a vote to remain, I leave her with that note hangin'
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Jun 23, 2016
Jun 23, 2016 at 6:37 AM UTC
All too bad
(20 minute poetry) 11am tube is jacked packed to the rafters no sound of laughter only the dismal wails as we go down the rails on the trail we have travelled before. I'm stood in the aisle surrounded by a perch full of people a pike load of tenseness that waits to explode. jeez this road keeps on getting tougher Why should I suffer it? why not opt out of it? But I am bound to it a dog in the pound to it gnawing away as it too gnaws at me one day I'll be free of it if only to sit and spit or whittle some wood into pegs. Legs are giving me gyp tripped over the case on the floor did I give that person what for ha she took not a blind bit of notice and just flew into the seat I was eying she being firty years younger than I I want to cry. Is a vote no a no vote or a vote to remain, I leave her with that note hangin'
john-edward-smallshaw
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Jun 23, 2016
Jun 23, 2016 at 6:37 AM UTC
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