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An overcrowded bus; my elbow touching yours. Pretty-eyed gem, I say to myself as you look up to me. In the background I can hear Etta James singing and teasing-- At last, my love has come along...
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Jun 10, 2016
Jun 10, 2016 at 11:07 AM UTC
Too cliché Cupid is thinking of using a shotgun instead
An overcrowded bus; my elbow touching yours. Pretty-eyed gem, I say to myself as you look up to me. In the background I can hear Etta James singing and teasing-- At last, my love has come along...
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Jun 10, 2016
Jun 10, 2016 at 11:07 AM UTC
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