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Dew drops shined on the grass Morning dew glistened on the fresh green shoots …… The delicate dew drops hung at the very tips of long and reaching blades of green grass in the warm summer sun the dampness of night left its traces dancing upon the crab as the dawn glow shown across the valley nearly translucent water particles sat waiting for the rays to transmogrify their very structure and give rise to photosynthesis under the starshine …………. Dum dum dum dum doobie doobie do Dum dum dum dum dum Doobie doobie … Two dew drops walked into a straw shack Rolled into a grass hut Sauntered into an old saloon….. The morning dew sent me spinning……
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Jun 7, 2016
Jun 7, 2016 at 11:30 AM UTC
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Dew drops shined on the grass Morning dew glistened on the fresh green shoots …… The delicate dew drops hung at the very tips of long and reaching blades of green grass in the warm summer sun the dampness of night left its traces dancing upon the crab as the dawn glow shown across the valley nearly translucent water particles sat waiting for the rays to transmogrify their very structure and give rise to photosynthesis under the starshine …………. Dum dum dum dum doobie doobie do Dum dum dum dum dum Doobie doobie … Two dew drops walked into a straw shack Rolled into a grass hut Sauntered into an old saloon….. The morning dew sent me spinning……
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Jun 7, 2016
Jun 7, 2016 at 11:30 AM UTC
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