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I gave into a subtle beating, Wrought once by Eros’ tasked -entreating, The winds confound I lost my heart and… …she of black-haired, eyes, dark beauty; warm-rosined cheeks of nature gladdened. For Pallas' claim, -said we both were saddened. And me a farmer, she a princess, I of yoked-labor, while her suitors, -the best. Doth Father-King did mantic challenge, that challenge being sought in no jest. Accosted me the low-ly suitor, He gave of me a challenge -the worst. He sent me to the serpent’s folly. With dagger and heart, whirlwind passion, sought I did the guiles’ jolly. Up the cragged wind-swept mountain, past laurel berries, trees of holly, Into white polished marble temple to the folly of a lair-born beast. Gave my most but just a farmer, heart of swelling beat untempered. As he set out, devour meal thus conquered, came she the dark-haired raven beauty, with shrieks and wails doth shocked the serpent, he surprised I plunged my dagger. Serpent dead she held her finger to my lips and then did whisper; “We of Pallas judgment true did, find our love rise from ash-field –lister. Tell of this you will to no one, you the boy who captures fair-heart, To father you shall be a hero, deception we of female -impart, Cleverness you must now fashion, must fashion your will to a high art, Something of a nature now you must know, Like the serpent-challenge dealt your passion a blow, Apples will not save you once and, Once as King and you my hus-band, We the two of Pallas’ favor, love forever shall we savor, *I the half of you shall sing, you the half shall make me King,* We together, rule forever, we of two sides brawn and clever, No serpent ever come between us, now that we a love -Athena’s! Go now and this be our se-cret, marry me and never re-gret, all is yours and I your egret!” Of this I did sit and ponder, on that hill of temple, off at yonder, Me of fields, dirt-laden squire, she at court make of me a liar, Is her beauty, hand a console -to the surety and loss of my soul? Run I did to the city my way, storm gates to the court and did say; “These, the teeth of folly’s serpent and she will be my wife on this day!” Aged now and sit here, grumble... Kingdom of deceit into which I crumble; Woe to me how didst I tumble? In rush to love perhaps did stumble? In later years now here I humble; ...love was not worth all the trouble.
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Jun 5, 2016
Jun 5, 2016 at 5:56 PM UTC
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I gave into a subtle beating, Wrought once by Eros’ tasked -entreating, The winds confound I lost my heart and… …she of black-haired, eyes, dark beauty; warm-rosined cheeks of nature gladdened. For Pallas' claim, -said we both were saddened. And me a farmer, she a princess, I of yoked-labor, while her suitors, -the best. Doth Father-King did mantic challenge, that challenge being sought in no jest. Accosted me the low-ly suitor, He gave of me a challenge -the worst. He sent me to the serpent’s folly. With dagger and heart, whirlwind passion, sought I did the guiles’ jolly. Up the cragged wind-swept mountain, past laurel berries, trees of holly, Into white polished marble temple to the folly of a lair-born beast. Gave my most but just a farmer, heart of swelling beat untempered. As he set out, devour meal thus conquered, came she the dark-haired raven beauty, with shrieks and wails doth shocked the serpent, he surprised I plunged my dagger. Serpent dead she held her finger to my lips and then did whisper; “We of Pallas judgment true did, find our love rise from ash-field –lister. Tell of this you will to no one, you the boy who captures fair-heart, To father you shall be a hero, deception we of female -impart, Cleverness you must now fashion, must fashion your will to a high art, Something of a nature now you must know, Like the serpent-challenge dealt your passion a blow, Apples will not save you once and, Once as King and you my hus-band, We the two of Pallas’ favor, love forever shall we savor, *I the half of you shall sing, you the half shall make me King,* We together, rule forever, we of two sides brawn and clever, No serpent ever come between us, now that we a love -Athena’s! Go now and this be our se-cret, marry me and never re-gret, all is yours and I your egret!” Of this I did sit and ponder, on that hill of temple, off at yonder, Me of fields, dirt-laden squire, she at court make of me a liar, Is her beauty, hand a console -to the surety and loss of my soul? Run I did to the city my way, storm gates to the court and did say; “These, the teeth of folly’s serpent and she will be my wife on this day!” Aged now and sit here, grumble... Kingdom of deceit into which I crumble; Woe to me how didst I tumble? In rush to love perhaps did stumble? In later years now here I humble; ...love was not worth all the trouble.
Old English-style rhyming verse. The classic mythology of the man entranced-by or enslaved by the serpent and rescued by cunning, trickery or deceit on the part of the female. This tale is as old as written history.
david-john-mowers
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Jun 5, 2016
Jun 5, 2016 at 5:56 PM UTC
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