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I tried to write on the wall of your heart but with grudge the gates were rusted shut. I was left outside, waiting and hoping. I pulled on the portal gate with all my passion, but the constringed chains closed chance. Exhausted, I whispered please, I serenaded and susurrated, softly, sweetly, but still the barred path stared back at me. I stopped trying. I waited. I never left. I stood, I sat. I walked around, but never departed. Eternity passed, but I waited still. I slumbered at the gate, afraid to leave. Jolt! I woke to chains clangorous collapse A statue I remained, afraid of dreams embrace still bound. The gate swung slowly open, aware of its very action. A breath I barely breathed. Invited at last, I slipped within.
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Jan 27, 2012
Jan 27, 2012 at 10:06 PM UTC
I tried to write on the wall of your heart (work still in progress)
I tried to write on the wall of your heart but with grudge the gates were rusted shut. I was left outside, waiting and hoping. I pulled on the portal gate with all my passion, but the constringed chains closed chance. Exhausted, I whispered please, I serenaded and susurrated, softly, sweetly, but still the barred path stared back at me. I stopped trying. I waited. I never left. I stood, I sat. I walked around, but never departed. Eternity passed, but I waited still. I slumbered at the gate, afraid to leave. Jolt! I woke to chains clangorous collapse A statue I remained, afraid of dreams embrace still bound. The gate swung slowly open, aware of its very action. A breath I barely breathed. Invited at last, I slipped within.
still working on a few more stanzas and general editing....
aric-j-brisolara
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Jan 27, 2012
Jan 27, 2012 at 10:06 PM UTC
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