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The air felt thick as it rushed up from the forrest in my mind i needed to breath yet my lungs gave in this earth that we so trust and need was failing me breath damm it breath as i lay there stars appeared as the shallow began pings of pain popping and piercing in that need for air fight all out yet need all the more this breath without me i'll be no more breath damm it breath the light stared to fail was this near the end as breath without me was soon my best freind no more pain just a calmness within joy at the freedom my new world begin my new world begin
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Jan 22, 2012
Jan 22, 2012 at 4:26 AM UTC
New world
The air felt thick as it rushed up from the forrest in my mind i needed to breath yet my lungs gave in this earth that we so trust and need was failing me breath damm it breath as i lay there stars appeared as the shallow began pings of pain popping and piercing in that need for air fight all out yet need all the more this breath without me i'll be no more breath damm it breath the light stared to fail was this near the end as breath without me was soon my best freind no more pain just a calmness within joy at the freedom my new world begin my new world begin
andy-fardell
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Jan 22, 2012
Jan 22, 2012 at 4:26 AM UTC
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