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I've always had this empty feeling in my heart. I've tried many times over the years to satisfy it First I became a teacher. What better way to fill my void than by educating the leaders of tomorrow? I taught them.  I filled their heads with knowledge.  Every child that entered my classroom left with an appreciation of what they had learned. Still, when I laid in bed at night, I felt that emptiness in my soul ******* up my contentment. So I stopped teaching Next, I became an adventurer. Clearly my last job, while fulfilling was incredibly boring.  What better way to fill the void than to feel the adrenaline rushing through my head? I skydived, I wrestled alligators, I climbed mountains, I pod raced. I felt more alive than I ever had before.  It was exhilarating. Women loved me, men wanted to be me. Still.  It didn't fill the void.  I would go to bed with women whose eyes were just as empty as I was.  I would wake up with plastic and rubber. I stopped thrill seeking. Next, I became an astronaut. I clearly needed to complement excitement with the satisfaction of doing something good for the world. I studied the universe.  I traced lines along the constellations. My research was renowned by scholars worldwide.  With my help, the world entered a new paradigm Still, the void persisted.   I became an architect and built some of the most mind-boggling structures that had ever been envisioned I became a doctor and found the cure to the diseases of humanity I became a poet and wrote words that echoed throughout the ages. After all I had done After all I had accomplished After all the time I had spent I was still empty.            Then I looked up            Then I opened my eyes            Then I realized All I had been missing All this time Was you.
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Jan 21, 2012
Jan 21, 2012 at 4:30 PM UTC
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I've always had this empty feeling in my heart. I've tried many times over the years to satisfy it First I became a teacher. What better way to fill my void than by educating the leaders of tomorrow? I taught them.  I filled their heads with knowledge.  Every child that entered my classroom left with an appreciation of what they had learned. Still, when I laid in bed at night, I felt that emptiness in my soul ******* up my contentment. So I stopped teaching Next, I became an adventurer. Clearly my last job, while fulfilling was incredibly boring.  What better way to fill the void than to feel the adrenaline rushing through my head? I skydived, I wrestled alligators, I climbed mountains, I pod raced. I felt more alive than I ever had before.  It was exhilarating. Women loved me, men wanted to be me. Still.  It didn't fill the void.  I would go to bed with women whose eyes were just as empty as I was.  I would wake up with plastic and rubber. I stopped thrill seeking. Next, I became an astronaut. I clearly needed to complement excitement with the satisfaction of doing something good for the world. I studied the universe.  I traced lines along the constellations. My research was renowned by scholars worldwide.  With my help, the world entered a new paradigm Still, the void persisted.   I became an architect and built some of the most mind-boggling structures that had ever been envisioned I became a doctor and found the cure to the diseases of humanity I became a poet and wrote words that echoed throughout the ages. After all I had done After all I had accomplished After all the time I had spent I was still empty.            Then I looked up            Then I opened my eyes            Then I realized All I had been missing All this time Was you.
j-a-doetsch
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40/M/American
Jan 21, 2012
Jan 21, 2012 at 4:30 PM UTC
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