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In the storming chaos of blades, I fell upon the battlefield of malice and might. The menace before me arching his crooked smile, And whispering sweet everything's to my ear. In the blood stained dawn i was born anew, Even as his cold pale hands caressed my cheek. Madness dripped from his eyes velvet eyes, As I burned vengeful in my heart I arose the, ashen angle of victory. With the wave of my hands i burned them all, The enemy that stormed forth, And those I swore to protect. A unfathomable beauty of unparalleled power. Like M i became a great destroyer, An Echelon by another name. I am forever now a wanderer of valor. The Great Antithesis of the Mashochrist.
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Jan 17, 2012
Jan 17, 2012 at 11:02 PM UTC
The Birth of the Antithesis (an excerpt)
In the storming chaos of blades, I fell upon the battlefield of malice and might. The menace before me arching his crooked smile, And whispering sweet everything's to my ear. In the blood stained dawn i was born anew, Even as his cold pale hands caressed my cheek. Madness dripped from his eyes velvet eyes, As I burned vengeful in my heart I arose the, ashen angle of victory. With the wave of my hands i burned them all, The enemy that stormed forth, And those I swore to protect. A unfathomable beauty of unparalleled power. Like M i became a great destroyer, An Echelon by another name. I am forever now a wanderer of valor. The Great Antithesis of the Mashochrist.
This is actually a poetic excerpt from one of my short stories in the works called " Land of the Burning Chrysanthemum" I need to finish some of the project. Essentially this is where the main character finds a book in a ruined village. He begins flipping through it and learns about the Antithesis one of the god like members of the Echelon that oversee and influence the world. Wish i could post my novel stuff here but they are not poems so i guess not P.S.- i still have a bad cough but i am alot better than you J.P. and anyone else who wished me well
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Jan 17, 2012
Jan 17, 2012 at 11:02 PM UTC
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