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i watched the earth consume the sun, a rampant fire blazing within. the sky turned orange and pink and peach and purple and everything in between, it was like an explosion had gone off and left the beauty and dust behind, i eyed the green trees become dark silhouettes, painting themselves against the backdrop of opalescence. smoke coming from chimneys took on a dark grey shade and outlines of houses and rooftops began to separate the gravel from the welkin. i adored the sky ablaze and watched it scorch and blacken with rage. it was everything and nothing, and as angry as it was, it felt peaceful. and at once, the sky was dead, and small fragments of the previous blaze dotted the dark coat above. it was as if to say, the world is sleeping, but our problems are not, for though the sky is dark and no longer ablaze, stars still coat the interstice to remind us of what is unfinished.
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May 2, 2016
May 2, 2016 at 11:25 PM UTC
Dusk
i watched the earth consume the sun, a rampant fire blazing within. the sky turned orange and pink and peach and purple and everything in between, it was like an explosion had gone off and left the beauty and dust behind, i eyed the green trees become dark silhouettes, painting themselves against the backdrop of opalescence. smoke coming from chimneys took on a dark grey shade and outlines of houses and rooftops began to separate the gravel from the welkin. i adored the sky ablaze and watched it scorch and blacken with rage. it was everything and nothing, and as angry as it was, it felt peaceful. and at once, the sky was dead, and small fragments of the previous blaze dotted the dark coat above. it was as if to say, the world is sleeping, but our problems are not, for though the sky is dark and no longer ablaze, stars still coat the interstice to remind us of what is unfinished.
• i watched the sun set today and it made me think about how it's an ongoing war between the sun and the moon...
aoifelizabeth
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May 2, 2016
May 2, 2016 at 11:25 PM UTC
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