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This is a Deep poem. The sound of it resonates in your Soul. You can tell it's deep for a couple of reasons: random words are Capitalized and they shouldn't be and it's weird. I use words like cacophony and Endless. I talk about things like Conformity and Pain and Myself. Can't figure out why that word is italicized?  I can't either. I look at the problems of Society and say "I am going to talk about you so hard right now." The title of it is confusing and you are trying to figure out "Why?  That literally has nothing to do with anything in the poem." And I laugh.  Marvel at the deepness. Some stanzas are             weirdly                                                         shaped but it's all just part of the                        poem's meaning. In the moment of silence after reading think about this poem and how RAW how REAL how EMOTIONAL it is.   Everything necessary for a deep poem is in here. This is a deep Poem.  Just trust me.
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Jan 9, 2012
Jan 9, 2012 at 12:31 PM UTC
Orange Velvet Sunset Feelings
This is a Deep poem. The sound of it resonates in your Soul. You can tell it's deep for a couple of reasons: random words are Capitalized and they shouldn't be and it's weird. I use words like cacophony and Endless. I talk about things like Conformity and Pain and Myself. Can't figure out why that word is italicized?  I can't either. I look at the problems of Society and say "I am going to talk about you so hard right now." The title of it is confusing and you are trying to figure out "Why?  That literally has nothing to do with anything in the poem." And I laugh.  Marvel at the deepness. Some stanzas are             weirdly                                                         shaped but it's all just part of the                        poem's meaning. In the moment of silence after reading think about this poem and how RAW how REAL how EMOTIONAL it is.   Everything necessary for a deep poem is in here. This is a deep Poem.  Just trust me.
sam-schedler
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Jan 9, 2012
Jan 9, 2012 at 12:31 PM UTC
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