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I'm on a slow moving train Rickety, unsafe; chugging desperately. Swaying under constant beating rain, And I sit trapped and sick in pain. Empty compartments, curtains torn and charred, Boarded windows, seats worn and scarred And there's a lock on the door Where laughter and chatter flitter from the walls; It becomes louder when we pass The graveyard The smoke from the screeching wheels Dances its sinister rise, and is all that I breathe; I choke on the fog and water fills my vision People mistake the invisible devil for air. And I think, what's scarier? A train going nowhere with no destination With my ticket lasting a lifetime Or a train with an eventual dead end.
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Apr 19, 2016
Apr 19, 2016 at 9:54 PM UTC
train.
I'm on a slow moving train Rickety, unsafe; chugging desperately. Swaying under constant beating rain, And I sit trapped and sick in pain. Empty compartments, curtains torn and charred, Boarded windows, seats worn and scarred And there's a lock on the door Where laughter and chatter flitter from the walls; It becomes louder when we pass The graveyard The smoke from the screeching wheels Dances its sinister rise, and is all that I breathe; I choke on the fog and water fills my vision People mistake the invisible devil for air. And I think, what's scarier? A train going nowhere with no destination With my ticket lasting a lifetime Or a train with an eventual dead end.
train metaphor depression misery imagery
luisa-c
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Apr 19, 2016
Apr 19, 2016 at 9:54 PM UTC
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