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pulse of 80s music      conversation swirls between   drinks bubbles rolling      under    the   tongue bank holiday getaway beermats not getting any   younger    doesn’t mean you have to feel   older people    stream in    shadows pour across   the     floor names that haven’t spilt from my lips    for years    and you wonder     how     long the   puddle   will last names scribbled by a   dartboard the faint          clunk    of potted   pool ***** dialogue   fizzles like   tablets    in water voices    dripping coming     then going wilt into the cool   spring   night
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Apr 17, 2016
Apr 17, 2016 at 11:15 AM UTC
Oliver Twist II
pulse of 80s music      conversation swirls between   drinks bubbles rolling      under    the   tongue bank holiday getaway beermats not getting any   younger    doesn’t mean you have to feel   older people    stream in    shadows pour across   the     floor names that haven’t spilt from my lips    for years    and you wonder     how     long the   puddle   will last names scribbled by a   dartboard the faint          clunk    of potted   pool ***** dialogue   fizzles like   tablets    in water voices    dripping coming     then going wilt into the cool   spring   night
Written: April 2016. Explanation: A poem written in my own time, mostly constructed during a mini school reunion of sorts at a local pub named 'Oliver Twist.' This piece is similar to a previous poem of mine with the same title (minus the 'II'), which you can also find on HP. There have been minimal changes from the first draft. All feedback welcome. A link to my Facebook writing page can be found on my HP home page. NOTE: Many of my older pieces will be removed from HP at some point in the future.
reece-aj-chambers
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33/M/English
Apr 17, 2016
Apr 17, 2016 at 11:15 AM UTC
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