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Waiting with twitching fingers As the judges come judging Fear within his heart lingers ''What if they were misjudging?'' The critics were not amazed As other kids looked at God ''Must have been how he was raised'' They said with a simple nod. The critics' mouth forms a word "C+ no better, no worse" And what god had really heard was "God you did not come first". God added Adam and Eve Just so the C+ was changed And in his heart he believe "C+ could sure be exchanged". The critics came around again God gestured "Look at the finest", With a scribble of an inked pen, C+ changed to a C-
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Apr 15, 2016
Apr 15, 2016 at 5:37 PM UTC
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Waiting with twitching fingers As the judges come judging Fear within his heart lingers ''What if they were misjudging?'' The critics were not amazed As other kids looked at God ''Must have been how he was raised'' They said with a simple nod. The critics' mouth forms a word "C+ no better, no worse" And what god had really heard was "God you did not come first". God added Adam and Eve Just so the C+ was changed And in his heart he believe "C+ could sure be exchanged". The critics came around again God gestured "Look at the finest", With a scribble of an inked pen, C+ changed to a C-
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Apr 15, 2016
Apr 15, 2016 at 5:37 PM UTC
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