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the strangest dream I had my mind did stir    a faint symphony beyond dark distance    black pearly gates of enticing luster my entire essence pulled forward in ethereal trance    as gates slowly opened to draw me inside    held steadfast by intrigue I offered no resistance progressing downward in pitch darkness a great sadness I espied    song of great sorrow its melody did sway    familiar voices, recognizable cries the troubles and sufferings of others whom in life I turned away    in trembling sadness the echoes permeated    my body, spirit and soul did fray a cacophony of pain and regret my eyes more exacerbated    looking into a mirror stained    reflections of hurt my own actions created light’s pinpoint guided me from this valley disdained    into a lake of fiery brimstone    vengeance consuming me till nothing remained
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Jan 3, 2012
Jan 3, 2012 at 1:30 PM UTC
The Abyss (Revisited)
the strangest dream I had my mind did stir    a faint symphony beyond dark distance    black pearly gates of enticing luster my entire essence pulled forward in ethereal trance    as gates slowly opened to draw me inside    held steadfast by intrigue I offered no resistance progressing downward in pitch darkness a great sadness I espied    song of great sorrow its melody did sway    familiar voices, recognizable cries the troubles and sufferings of others whom in life I turned away    in trembling sadness the echoes permeated    my body, spirit and soul did fray a cacophony of pain and regret my eyes more exacerbated    looking into a mirror stained    reflections of hurt my own actions created light’s pinpoint guided me from this valley disdained    into a lake of fiery brimstone    vengeance consuming me till nothing remained
© January 3, 2012 I thought it would be cool to rewrite this poem in the "Terza Rima" format of The Divine Comedy.
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Jan 3, 2012
Jan 3, 2012 at 1:30 PM UTC
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