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The smell of the foundry surrounds you abounds and wreaths around you. A man of ore, born of the earth I thought of you as Roman. Alive, shuddering with the stress and exertions of recent war The thrill of hardship fresh upon you, made ever-stronger by violent work your fibres stretch then relax to gather in quiet, resting power Glittered in sweat, you have raced through history to arrive, tattered and magnificent, heaving, and worn like a mountain I have melted into you - piston thighs greased with excitement! As your black-ringed fingers chase a whitened path, through my pebbled steam Our minerals mix: salt and blood, tears and love and the hooves of legion drum in my ears, outpacing a gathering storm as little death overwhelms me You are home, hanging suspended in a grief-cloud above me. And I invite you, with a succession of imagined dilations, to rain down.
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Apr 13, 2016
Apr 13, 2016 at 10:58 AM UTC
Blood in the Fire
The smell of the foundry surrounds you abounds and wreaths around you. A man of ore, born of the earth I thought of you as Roman. Alive, shuddering with the stress and exertions of recent war The thrill of hardship fresh upon you, made ever-stronger by violent work your fibres stretch then relax to gather in quiet, resting power Glittered in sweat, you have raced through history to arrive, tattered and magnificent, heaving, and worn like a mountain I have melted into you - piston thighs greased with excitement! As your black-ringed fingers chase a whitened path, through my pebbled steam Our minerals mix: salt and blood, tears and love and the hooves of legion drum in my ears, outpacing a gathering storm as little death overwhelms me You are home, hanging suspended in a grief-cloud above me. And I invite you, with a succession of imagined dilations, to rain down.
miss-tabitha-devereaux
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Apr 13, 2016
Apr 13, 2016 at 10:58 AM UTC
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