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i hate it when you have a hangnail but it is mostly a piece of skin that is really steadfast about not detaching from your finger. it’s like the piece of skin has separation anxiety and you can’t get it to leave ever all you want is for the piece of skin to move out. today is your twentieth birthday and you are thinking about your mortality a whole bunch and how you have provided the piece of skin with a comfortable home and now you want it to move on and make a big life for itself so when you’re old and more carrot-like you will have the piece of skin to take care of you until you are ready to make the big trip to hamilton known as dying alone and feeling okay about it because hamilton is a nice place to die alone hamilton is a port city in the canadian province of ontario you dream of hamilton and you are already a little bit more carrot-like on this day, your twentieth birthday. we want the piece of skin to get its **** together so we can all be happy for you one day when the amount of carrot-like characteristics you grow into becomes immeasurable and creamy. the piece of skin smiles and says it does not like your conservative-minded nonsense the piece of skin feels as though it has a right to prosperity and a new season of hey arnold and its own episode of mtv cribs. you say the piece of skin is too liberal and you get out a pair of scissors and cut of your finger the finger with the piece of skin that was too clingy is now resting peacefully on the hardwood floor of your apartment in a pool of blood that you are proud to say is something you made on your own. the piece of skin quotes hemingway as it dies the reference goes over your head and the reader’s head too
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Dec 30, 2011
Dec 30, 2011 at 1:56 PM UTC
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i hate it when you have a hangnail but it is mostly a piece of skin that is really steadfast about not detaching from your finger. it’s like the piece of skin has separation anxiety and you can’t get it to leave ever all you want is for the piece of skin to move out. today is your twentieth birthday and you are thinking about your mortality a whole bunch and how you have provided the piece of skin with a comfortable home and now you want it to move on and make a big life for itself so when you’re old and more carrot-like you will have the piece of skin to take care of you until you are ready to make the big trip to hamilton known as dying alone and feeling okay about it because hamilton is a nice place to die alone hamilton is a port city in the canadian province of ontario you dream of hamilton and you are already a little bit more carrot-like on this day, your twentieth birthday. we want the piece of skin to get its **** together so we can all be happy for you one day when the amount of carrot-like characteristics you grow into becomes immeasurable and creamy. the piece of skin smiles and says it does not like your conservative-minded nonsense the piece of skin feels as though it has a right to prosperity and a new season of hey arnold and its own episode of mtv cribs. you say the piece of skin is too liberal and you get out a pair of scissors and cut of your finger the finger with the piece of skin that was too clingy is now resting peacefully on the hardwood floor of your apartment in a pool of blood that you are proud to say is something you made on your own. the piece of skin quotes hemingway as it dies the reference goes over your head and the reader’s head too
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Dec 30, 2011
Dec 30, 2011 at 1:56 PM UTC
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