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Her sobs punch me eardrums. Green eyes rimmed with red, she presses her forehead firmly into her knee caps. I stare at her hands and imagine them in his. “I can’t breathe underwater like I used to…” Passed out on the floor she gasps for air. I bet she dreams of water falls and razorblades. He flattened her optimism with his realism. Confused by body parts and heartbeats, they made disappointment a language. Illiterate lovers “I can’t breathe underwater like I used to, before I met you...”
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Dec 30, 2011
Dec 30, 2011 at 1:46 AM UTC
caro, michigan.
Her sobs punch me eardrums. Green eyes rimmed with red, she presses her forehead firmly into her knee caps. I stare at her hands and imagine them in his. “I can’t breathe underwater like I used to…” Passed out on the floor she gasps for air. I bet she dreams of water falls and razorblades. He flattened her optimism with his realism. Confused by body parts and heartbeats, they made disappointment a language. Illiterate lovers “I can’t breathe underwater like I used to, before I met you...”
Italicized lines are lyrics from the song "Doo Right" by: Man Man
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Dec 30, 2011
Dec 30, 2011 at 1:46 AM UTC
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