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Don’t disappear From my sight, From my mind. I feel your pulse weakening. You’re fading away. You cross these rivers of thought with me, But do you know where I intend to go? Do you give care for things like this? Do you give grace now? I feel you fading away. Take the long walk home. Tell me all the things you know, All the things, your eyes have seen All the things your tongue tasted I want to know all that makes your heart storm All that makes you dawn like the sun on a bright day. You’re fading away. I cannot find in me to make you stay, Words won’t stick, hands won’t fight, legs won’t run, I am here. Don’t disappear from my sight, from my mind. I feel your pulse weakening I feel the life in you escaping, With it all our past and what-ifs. You’re fading away, but don’t disappear.
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Apr 3, 2016
Apr 3, 2016 at 3:51 PM UTC
You are Fading Away
Don’t disappear From my sight, From my mind. I feel your pulse weakening. You’re fading away. You cross these rivers of thought with me, But do you know where I intend to go? Do you give care for things like this? Do you give grace now? I feel you fading away. Take the long walk home. Tell me all the things you know, All the things, your eyes have seen All the things your tongue tasted I want to know all that makes your heart storm All that makes you dawn like the sun on a bright day. You’re fading away. I cannot find in me to make you stay, Words won’t stick, hands won’t fight, legs won’t run, I am here. Don’t disappear from my sight, from my mind. I feel your pulse weakening I feel the life in you escaping, With it all our past and what-ifs. You’re fading away, but don’t disappear.
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Apr 3, 2016
Apr 3, 2016 at 3:51 PM UTC
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