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Facing me, you sleep. “I woke too soon— you shouldn’t wake me up so early ...” Yes, I know, but I’d been dreaming and I guess I had to hear your voice. It’s now mid-June, midsummer almost. On the seat adjacent a commuter reads a paper, chin on hand and, showing maybe more than she had planned, a miniskirted woman tugs, impatient, at her hem, returns then to her book, not noticing it’s slipped back up again. A tepid breeze blows through the pane above you, ruffling your hair, but you don’t stir. The train is getting crowded. Everywhere I look: these strangers who remind me how I love you.
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Dec 28, 2011
Dec 28, 2011 at 2:03 AM UTC
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Facing me, you sleep. “I woke too soon— you shouldn’t wake me up so early ...” Yes, I know, but I’d been dreaming and I guess I had to hear your voice. It’s now mid-June, midsummer almost. On the seat adjacent a commuter reads a paper, chin on hand and, showing maybe more than she had planned, a miniskirted woman tugs, impatient, at her hem, returns then to her book, not noticing it’s slipped back up again. A tepid breeze blows through the pane above you, ruffling your hair, but you don’t stir. The train is getting crowded. Everywhere I look: these strangers who remind me how I love you.
from the book 'Tease it free'
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Dec 28, 2011
Dec 28, 2011 at 2:03 AM UTC
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