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My infatuation meter is on the fritz It hasn't worked since the reading of you When I come in contact with others, no sort of result is produced The spark inside has finally died, and you're the one who drenched it in crocodile tears -- claiming you're too weak to face your fears...it's like looking at a reflection of myself this year... We could have battled them all       together But instead we're settled to      friends of fair-weather I am the one who is suffering; for still today, you appear                                       in my dreams Decades from now, I envision my solitary conquest: Success; from recording my innards I've always repressed And of course, an unfilled void, I fear not to attest All because that spark inside me remained unaddressed But I have no more patience or time to invest in a folly; I'll rid of my broken meter I now detest It died with you, now perhaps your memory too may be finally laid to rest
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Dec 27, 2011
Dec 27, 2011 at 9:46 PM UTC
Laid to Rest (revised)
My infatuation meter is on the fritz It hasn't worked since the reading of you When I come in contact with others, no sort of result is produced The spark inside has finally died, and you're the one who drenched it in crocodile tears -- claiming you're too weak to face your fears...it's like looking at a reflection of myself this year... We could have battled them all       together But instead we're settled to      friends of fair-weather I am the one who is suffering; for still today, you appear                                       in my dreams Decades from now, I envision my solitary conquest: Success; from recording my innards I've always repressed And of course, an unfilled void, I fear not to attest All because that spark inside me remained unaddressed But I have no more patience or time to invest in a folly; I'll rid of my broken meter I now detest It died with you, now perhaps your memory too may be finally laid to rest
Revised and retitled version of "Your memory may be finally laid to rest."
roberta-day
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30/F/American
Dec 27, 2011
Dec 27, 2011 at 9:46 PM UTC
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