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that's nice, mm, that's nice, cover it up, keeping up appearances, let's smooth it over, butter it up, mm, slimy pistons moving easily greased? indeed, for someone who is to master the names of many things, you seem overly concerned over-using pronouns, so you can't get coordinates, you're abstracting basically, smoothing things out, you're the easiest to spot abstracting via a censor methodology, i know you're not a philosopher a snake eating its own tail with verbiage of having thought out so much you could claim to be a miner, but buckling to a pancaked face when told to do rhetoric... they really really do want to steal that page from your hands, it's not a set-list, you're supposed to be a trained monkey, white paper and stages don't work unless they're hidden... but **** me, eroding your memory like that, you must really love your work to remember it like prayers... i don't get it, politicians get away with it, it's not heartfelt, it's autocued... poetics promo... but why is it promo (reveal), so abstracting means revealing? i thought it was more like hiding something and getting caught ************ poetics occulto? so which is it, abstracting is a way of revealing something or hiding something? i mean, overusing pronouns and not engaging in proper noun usage seems a bit futile in a multicultural scenario of cubists using african face masks for inspiration, excessive bloom of lips and nose sharpened by the artists's eyes into needle thin contorts - africans don't like things being bouncy and bubbly... they like sticks it would seem.
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Mar 22, 2016
Mar 22, 2016 at 3:18 PM UTC
poetic abstraction / pancakes
that's nice, mm, that's nice, cover it up, keeping up appearances, let's smooth it over, butter it up, mm, slimy pistons moving easily greased? indeed, for someone who is to master the names of many things, you seem overly concerned over-using pronouns, so you can't get coordinates, you're abstracting basically, smoothing things out, you're the easiest to spot abstracting via a censor methodology, i know you're not a philosopher a snake eating its own tail with verbiage of having thought out so much you could claim to be a miner, but buckling to a pancaked face when told to do rhetoric... they really really do want to steal that page from your hands, it's not a set-list, you're supposed to be a trained monkey, white paper and stages don't work unless they're hidden... but **** me, eroding your memory like that, you must really love your work to remember it like prayers... i don't get it, politicians get away with it, it's not heartfelt, it's autocued... poetics promo... but why is it promo (reveal), so abstracting means revealing? i thought it was more like hiding something and getting caught ************ poetics occulto? so which is it, abstracting is a way of revealing something or hiding something? i mean, overusing pronouns and not engaging in proper noun usage seems a bit futile in a multicultural scenario of cubists using african face masks for inspiration, excessive bloom of lips and nose sharpened by the artists's eyes into needle thin contorts - africans don't like things being bouncy and bubbly... they like sticks it would seem.
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Mar 22, 2016
Mar 22, 2016 at 3:18 PM UTC
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