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Your angel calls you From her distant doorway Beckoning come my weary love Into the Bigness. Lay your armored fears In the cradle of our hearts joined   where you may feel the pulse and light That makes our love. I am the chimera of your longings The whisper of the dreams You could never make come true Before you came to my door. Love the idea of us now But expect no kiss in kind Knowing my face must turn away Or you will never be free. This is how the Bigness works Leaving you half-starved Hungry for the touch of love's ghost Those desires that are too small That no longer serve In the Bigness. I am not the only angel calling From the light you crave And though you beg me to follow This is the bittersweet truth of the Bigness I will always leave you You must always come into it alone.
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Dec 23, 2011
Dec 23, 2011 at 11:01 AM UTC
INTO THE BIGNESS
Your angel calls you From her distant doorway Beckoning come my weary love Into the Bigness. Lay your armored fears In the cradle of our hearts joined   where you may feel the pulse and light That makes our love. I am the chimera of your longings The whisper of the dreams You could never make come true Before you came to my door. Love the idea of us now But expect no kiss in kind Knowing my face must turn away Or you will never be free. This is how the Bigness works Leaving you half-starved Hungry for the touch of love's ghost Those desires that are too small That no longer serve In the Bigness. I am not the only angel calling From the light you crave And though you beg me to follow This is the bittersweet truth of the Bigness I will always leave you You must always come into it alone.
This is killing me !  I just can't seem to trim it down.  Need stronger images, more flowing syntax. Sparse lightning I think.
michael-hoffman
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Dec 23, 2011
Dec 23, 2011 at 11:01 AM UTC
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