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I just want to say hey how are you and if you don't mind could I get to know you It seems today's not the day my heart just sways and then runs away I wish I could be right beside you but I'm too scared don't know what to do I just want to say hey how are you and if you don't mind could I get to know you maybe tomorrow i'll get the chance but will my heart shake or dance the dance
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Mar 16, 2016
Mar 16, 2016 at 9:32 PM UTC
"Hey" (W.I.P)
I just want to say hey how are you and if you don't mind could I get to know you It seems today's not the day my heart just sways and then runs away I wish I could be right beside you but I'm too scared don't know what to do I just want to say hey how are you and if you don't mind could I get to know you maybe tomorrow i'll get the chance but will my heart shake or dance the dance
Trying something slightly different then normal, I have a rythm in mind and trying to form it into a song. Order may be bad, but definitely want to work on this one. Any tips would be very welcome The chorus probably pretty obvious is: "I just want to say hey, how are you, and if you don't mind, could I get to know you" Thanks again :)
shannon-jeffery
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Mar 16, 2016
Mar 16, 2016 at 9:32 PM UTC
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