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I look past your face— traveling deeper inside through your consciousness passing the galaxies in your eyes farther beyond— abstract psychedelic dimensions of understanding in your brain surpassing— our comprehension of time, words & the divine as I continue traveling to the vast, farthest parts of you where there is just a weightless Nirvana of nothing… Here, there’s just a void, devoid of any life, or, remnants of sound. There is complete, nothing. There is more copacetic bliss here than any imaginary world, or ***** fantasy we’ve created.
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Dec 20, 2011
Dec 20, 2011 at 8:15 AM UTC
Weightless II
I look past your face— traveling deeper inside through your consciousness passing the galaxies in your eyes farther beyond— abstract psychedelic dimensions of understanding in your brain surpassing— our comprehension of time, words & the divine as I continue traveling to the vast, farthest parts of you where there is just a weightless Nirvana of nothing… Here, there’s just a void, devoid of any life, or, remnants of sound. There is complete, nothing. There is more copacetic bliss here than any imaginary world, or ***** fantasy we’ve created.
Here's the companion piece. http://hellopoetry.com/poem/weightless-1
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Dec 20, 2011
Dec 20, 2011 at 8:15 AM UTC
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