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I LOVE THE SHARPSHOOTER - SHE PUTS EVERYTHING RIGHT, IT'S SO GOOD SOMETIMES - SHE GIVES ME A FRIGHT, FROM EXPERIENCE, IT SEEMS MUCH BETTER THAN MINE, KEEPS YOU ON TRACK, STRANGELY KEEPS YOU IN LINE; I TOOK ALL THIS ENLIGHTENMENT, HEAVEN - SENT, AND THEN KNEW, DOWN THE ROCKY PATHS WHERE I WENT WRONG SOMETIMES, WHERE I LEFT MY OLD MINDSET, AND REALISED THAT WHAT YOU PUT IN IS WHAT YOU GET; I WAS THE LAST CHILD - SHARPSHOOTER WAS THE FIRST, I WAS SPOILED, MAYBE NO. 1 CAN BE BETTER VERSED, CAN HAVE A SERENITY WHICH IS HARD TO MATCH, DO YOU REALLY MEAN THAT, YES - THERE IS NO CATCH, NOTHING HIDDEN, AS PLAIN AND BEAUTIFUL FOR ALL TO SEE, I CONCEDE WITH MANY THINGS THAT SHE IS BETTER THAN ME!
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Mar 8, 2016
Mar 8, 2016 at 1:39 PM UTC
THE SHARPSHOOTER
I LOVE THE SHARPSHOOTER - SHE PUTS EVERYTHING RIGHT, IT'S SO GOOD SOMETIMES - SHE GIVES ME A FRIGHT, FROM EXPERIENCE, IT SEEMS MUCH BETTER THAN MINE, KEEPS YOU ON TRACK, STRANGELY KEEPS YOU IN LINE; I TOOK ALL THIS ENLIGHTENMENT, HEAVEN - SENT, AND THEN KNEW, DOWN THE ROCKY PATHS WHERE I WENT WRONG SOMETIMES, WHERE I LEFT MY OLD MINDSET, AND REALISED THAT WHAT YOU PUT IN IS WHAT YOU GET; I WAS THE LAST CHILD - SHARPSHOOTER WAS THE FIRST, I WAS SPOILED, MAYBE NO. 1 CAN BE BETTER VERSED, CAN HAVE A SERENITY WHICH IS HARD TO MATCH, DO YOU REALLY MEAN THAT, YES - THERE IS NO CATCH, NOTHING HIDDEN, AS PLAIN AND BEAUTIFUL FOR ALL TO SEE, I CONCEDE WITH MANY THINGS THAT SHE IS BETTER THAN ME!
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Mar 8, 2016
Mar 8, 2016 at 1:39 PM UTC
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