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The wind blows a cool breeze speaking a language that I can only hope to understand The sun shines through the barriers of leaves cascading down to hold me tightly, comfortably The foliage steady underneath my unsteady feet promises to give me balance The water buries the sand pulling it back into line always returning it safely home A soft creature appears from behind the green wall crouching curiously in fear, denial Unable to speak like the wind it simply blinks, both yellow eyes; once, twice, three times The long fur covering it's body blows with the western breeze head tilted towards the east It rises on two feet; remains stationary, despite the wind pushing it back An array of colours catches light from the creature; yellow eyes, purple fur, black teeth The deflection of colours creates a rainbow around the creature; a force field It casts no shadow despite the downward sun trying its hardest to expose the creature The array of colours surrounds the creature fading away with the sun behind the leaves. The foliage struggles against its foot moving forward in a staggering motion as if they were glued Fallen leaves crumble underneath its feet and flowers rot to a bruised purple Like quicksand the ground tries to swallow the creature, hold it still despite its strength Quicksand is not quick enough, the creature shuffles through the dying foliage The water retreats, taking the sand with it, gathering as large an army as possible The creature continues forward, the water continues back as far as it can before returning to shore They meet in an unwelcome collision the water trying to push the creature back, unsuccessful The creature emerges from the water droplets of water being repelled from its fur The wind changes direction pointing at me whispering words of caution whispering, yelling The sunlight illuminates me, sweat drips down my face like tears as if to say: hide The ground shakes and trembles beneath my feet urging me to move, keep moving The water reaches for me with open arms to hide in amongst the sand, to return safely The creature spots me; staring unflinchingly, it stares back into my eyes with yellow ones It's fur directing it towards me urges it onward dragging it alongside the cool breeze It's feet start toward me slowly as the trembling ground regains its posture so does it I stand in awe of this beautiful creature, so frightful so delicate aiming for me "Humph" the sound of it colliding with me is carried away with the wind, long gone The sun gleams off its black teeth blinding me before I feel it rip into my neck tearing flesh The green, brown, purple ground lay stained with my blood dripping from its mouth The incoming tide holds my hand one last time as the creature drags me back behind the green wall
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Feb 25, 2016
Feb 25, 2016 at 8:18 AM UTC
The Creature
The wind blows a cool breeze speaking a language that I can only hope to understand The sun shines through the barriers of leaves cascading down to hold me tightly, comfortably The foliage steady underneath my unsteady feet promises to give me balance The water buries the sand pulling it back into line always returning it safely home A soft creature appears from behind the green wall crouching curiously in fear, denial Unable to speak like the wind it simply blinks, both yellow eyes; once, twice, three times The long fur covering it's body blows with the western breeze head tilted towards the east It rises on two feet; remains stationary, despite the wind pushing it back An array of colours catches light from the creature; yellow eyes, purple fur, black teeth The deflection of colours creates a rainbow around the creature; a force field It casts no shadow despite the downward sun trying its hardest to expose the creature The array of colours surrounds the creature fading away with the sun behind the leaves. The foliage struggles against its foot moving forward in a staggering motion as if they were glued Fallen leaves crumble underneath its feet and flowers rot to a bruised purple Like quicksand the ground tries to swallow the creature, hold it still despite its strength Quicksand is not quick enough, the creature shuffles through the dying foliage The water retreats, taking the sand with it, gathering as large an army as possible The creature continues forward, the water continues back as far as it can before returning to shore They meet in an unwelcome collision the water trying to push the creature back, unsuccessful The creature emerges from the water droplets of water being repelled from its fur The wind changes direction pointing at me whispering words of caution whispering, yelling The sunlight illuminates me, sweat drips down my face like tears as if to say: hide The ground shakes and trembles beneath my feet urging me to move, keep moving The water reaches for me with open arms to hide in amongst the sand, to return safely The creature spots me; staring unflinchingly, it stares back into my eyes with yellow ones It's fur directing it towards me urges it onward dragging it alongside the cool breeze It's feet start toward me slowly as the trembling ground regains its posture so does it I stand in awe of this beautiful creature, so frightful so delicate aiming for me "Humph" the sound of it colliding with me is carried away with the wind, long gone The sun gleams off its black teeth blinding me before I feel it rip into my neck tearing flesh The green, brown, purple ground lay stained with my blood dripping from its mouth The incoming tide holds my hand one last time as the creature drags me back behind the green wall
joanna-louise-alexandre
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Feb 25, 2016
Feb 25, 2016 at 8:18 AM UTC
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