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her voice shakes like a mud wall in an earthquake, slurry and moistened with beer, struggling to stand in my ear, each fall of my boot chokes further up the hillside neck, her left behind cry cakes into my footsteps then bleats *SEAN! I’m gonna fall my legs hurt*, I’m worried the poison of fear will melt her to sand but I trust she doesn’t need assured looks or words, just strength in her back, her spine’s solid as mine, but she forgets I wait at the top, the dome where all upward strides will always lead an inverted pit for sinking stones too stubborn to abide to gravity there at the top,  the moon pinwheels in time to deep and dizzy breathing that yanks up my rooted bones plants them in pieces outside of my body her form summits at a crawl but buries hurry in her voice and comes near, commits a cold hand SLAP just begging to see my face broken *why would you run? you’re a **** but my abandonment was a sign of respect
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Dec 13, 2011
Dec 13, 2011 at 6:26 AM UTC
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her voice shakes like a mud wall in an earthquake, slurry and moistened with beer, struggling to stand in my ear, each fall of my boot chokes further up the hillside neck, her left behind cry cakes into my footsteps then bleats *SEAN! I’m gonna fall my legs hurt*, I’m worried the poison of fear will melt her to sand but I trust she doesn’t need assured looks or words, just strength in her back, her spine’s solid as mine, but she forgets I wait at the top, the dome where all upward strides will always lead an inverted pit for sinking stones too stubborn to abide to gravity there at the top,  the moon pinwheels in time to deep and dizzy breathing that yanks up my rooted bones plants them in pieces outside of my body her form summits at a crawl but buries hurry in her voice and comes near, commits a cold hand SLAP just begging to see my face broken *why would you run? you’re a **** but my abandonment was a sign of respect
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Dec 13, 2011
Dec 13, 2011 at 6:26 AM UTC
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