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i can't write anything good until i've had my morning coffee, the words are comatose inside me i can't write anything good until i've brushed my teeth the words are rotting inside each breath i can't write anything good until i've taken a shower the words will shine or be washed away i can't write anything good until i've sobered up until then all you get is belligerent repetitive uncreative pathetic
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Dec 12, 2011
Dec 12, 2011 at 9:46 AM UTC
still sort of drunk
i can't write anything good until i've had my morning coffee, the words are comatose inside me i can't write anything good until i've brushed my teeth the words are rotting inside each breath i can't write anything good until i've taken a shower the words will shine or be washed away i can't write anything good until i've sobered up until then all you get is belligerent repetitive uncreative pathetic
david-badgerow
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34/M/American
Dec 12, 2011
Dec 12, 2011 at 9:46 AM UTC
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