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if i were to be a patriarch of a religion, rather than a random prophet of one, i'd say muhammad is too much a patriarch wanting his children to take revenge rather than a solitary figure of being right, but if i said that, i might say that: well, you want to join my religious ambition, you'd be initiated aged 21, inhaling the sage of the diviners (salvia divinorum), suffered a brain haemorrhage and continued... not the **** easy sprinkle of baptismal water on your babe forehead... no you'd be dead... don't bother... esp. with your heart broken by the one who lied to you about its effects being akin to l.c.d. beneficial by an ex russian girlfriend... it's not about starting a new religion, it's about one enduring... aged 21... surviving a brain haemorrhage and heartbreak when lied to by a friend... survive that... you become a friend... but don't bother... as i've attested 9 years later with a poem like this one; too much ridicule from christians asserting a perfect society they constructed worthy of an export to places where despotism actually works... because there aren't enough people wanting to be pyramidally showing their identity of goo goo dolls... among the shouts of american head charge's rock 'n' roll ****** of patti smith.
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Feb 12, 2016
Feb 12, 2016 at 7:08 PM UTC
sober poem poem no. 1.99
if i were to be a patriarch of a religion, rather than a random prophet of one, i'd say muhammad is too much a patriarch wanting his children to take revenge rather than a solitary figure of being right, but if i said that, i might say that: well, you want to join my religious ambition, you'd be initiated aged 21, inhaling the sage of the diviners (salvia divinorum), suffered a brain haemorrhage and continued... not the **** easy sprinkle of baptismal water on your babe forehead... no you'd be dead... don't bother... esp. with your heart broken by the one who lied to you about its effects being akin to l.c.d. beneficial by an ex russian girlfriend... it's not about starting a new religion, it's about one enduring... aged 21... surviving a brain haemorrhage and heartbreak when lied to by a friend... survive that... you become a friend... but don't bother... as i've attested 9 years later with a poem like this one; too much ridicule from christians asserting a perfect society they constructed worthy of an export to places where despotism actually works... because there aren't enough people wanting to be pyramidally showing their identity of goo goo dolls... among the shouts of american head charge's rock 'n' roll ****** of patti smith.
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