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Amid the white notebooks dotting my desk hides a half-drawn sketch laying down some image of an ideal poem. It sits incomplete, but the plans I made surface to my vision— a sturdy poem of stubborn build, words, pliant, sad, and simple deft-attached, vine-like wrapped around bamboo scaffolds astride black steel framing. Dangling from two pinched fingers, the sketch has yet to display its mid-sized trees (for scale) and the few more floors envisioned. It could house with ease a teeming, drunken mass of patients with a fear of heights and post-traumatic stress. The burn of my popped lighter curves over the paper plane where the grassy lot’s drawn, where my hired architect would stand and plan the façade, no windows. His blueprints would radiate the math of symmetric perfection found symbolic of its New-Age form. Designers would be flown in from around the world, contractors would be called. And the sheer simplicity of it all would test their expertise challenged at last by the spire and final stanza which, if drawn, would only now be caught up by the flame casually ribboned across the page.
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Feb 6, 2010
Feb 6, 2010 at 8:32 AM UTC
Ideal Poem
Amid the white notebooks dotting my desk hides a half-drawn sketch laying down some image of an ideal poem. It sits incomplete, but the plans I made surface to my vision— a sturdy poem of stubborn build, words, pliant, sad, and simple deft-attached, vine-like wrapped around bamboo scaffolds astride black steel framing. Dangling from two pinched fingers, the sketch has yet to display its mid-sized trees (for scale) and the few more floors envisioned. It could house with ease a teeming, drunken mass of patients with a fear of heights and post-traumatic stress. The burn of my popped lighter curves over the paper plane where the grassy lot’s drawn, where my hired architect would stand and plan the façade, no windows. His blueprints would radiate the math of symmetric perfection found symbolic of its New-Age form. Designers would be flown in from around the world, contractors would be called. And the sheer simplicity of it all would test their expertise challenged at last by the spire and final stanza which, if drawn, would only now be caught up by the flame casually ribboned across the page.
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Feb 6, 2010
Feb 6, 2010 at 8:32 AM UTC
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