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**squinting up the leaves of the bountiful tree i espied a mango ripe and soft with goodness as the sun came gently filtering through aloft the wings of a little fellow with a long beak and a brisk song to celebrate dinner found my feathered visitor hovered above the vintage prize and as his thirsty proboscis drilled the succulent mango the warm enticing juice, natural and healthy as ever, drip-settled in the base of my hungry open eye i thought i heard a flourish in the triumphant bird-song such as one at the fall of a big wicket; and in that slow-motion moment, i knew: the mango was his, and it'd now be eat and let eat, till the last delectable mango**
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Feb 5, 2016
Feb 5, 2016 at 10:19 AM UTC
under the mango tree
**squinting up the leaves of the bountiful tree i espied a mango ripe and soft with goodness as the sun came gently filtering through aloft the wings of a little fellow with a long beak and a brisk song to celebrate dinner found my feathered visitor hovered above the vintage prize and as his thirsty proboscis drilled the succulent mango the warm enticing juice, natural and healthy as ever, drip-settled in the base of my hungry open eye i thought i heard a flourish in the triumphant bird-song such as one at the fall of a big wicket; and in that slow-motion moment, i knew: the mango was his, and it'd now be eat and let eat, till the last delectable mango**
wasn't so final a version after all, BUT THIS ONE IS. NOW HAS THE FEEL, POISE AND BALANCE THAT I WAS SEARCHING FOR
david-mungoshi
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Feb 5, 2016
Feb 5, 2016 at 10:19 AM UTC
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